Skriven: 2006-07-20
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• Cloudless Heaven •
Once upon a time...
I was the loneliest soul of all...
I was an invisible ghost that none could
ever see or love...
I dreamt of times where the darkness
couldn’t reach me...
In the darkness i was all alone and there
was no light or sound...
Just an empty space with no surface or
heaven...
There was no sun to light my day, there was
no stars to inspire me at night...
I lookt upon the empty heaven...
It was cloudless, lifeless...
All the beauty of the world could never exist
in this souless world of mine...
Sometimes i felt so alone that i burst into
tears and i screamed...
But this empty world devoured my emotions
so much that the tears dried out in an
instant and how much i even screamed, not
one word was with sound...
There was no point in runnig either...
No matter how far or how fast i run, i was
still at the same spot as when i started...
I am trapped forever in this nightmare...
Like a prisoner in my own little wicked world.
I had much to learn, but how could i in any
possible way understand how close i was to
the hidden light?
It was a brand new beginning, a chapter in
my life that would change me forever...
It was when the light for the first time in my
empty world, could break trouh and shine
like a sparkling sun and reveal the heaven!
You gave me wings so i could fly away, up
to the newly born clouds...
I was in love for the first time in my life and
i smiled like never before!
Thus, nothing lasts forever and love turned
to nothing...
The sun died out and my wings froze to ice.
I fell back into the darkness and all the
sound faded with the last echoes of my
shattering wings...
The clouds turned grey and started to cry
until they were no more...
Once again i stood all alone, starring at
the cloudless heaven with tears in my eyes.
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Kommentera gärna,
MVH: eran diktande Deppnalle.
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| Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) |
| Deppnalle - 7 jul 07 - 16:51 |
| Tack Lizan för din fina kommentar det är sånt som inspirerar mig att skriva ännu vackrare ord :) |
Lizan - 7 jul 07 - 14:23- Betyg:  |
så otroligt vackert..så gripande...
att du fick håret att resa sig
och det gick en ilning genom min kropp..
så djup..så otroligt naken...
narturligtvis en 5à...från mig till dig.. |
| wearingblack - 6 jul 07 - 23:53 |
glömde tillägga en sak... tack så mkt för att du berättade
din historia om självskadande... den berörde verkligen! |
| wearingblack - 6 jul 07 - 23:45- Betyg: |
jättefint! från att man läst första raden gick det
inte att sluta.
tack för din kommentar, msart sagt det där om att
"din värsta fiende är dig själv"... känner igen mig! |
| raa_W - 21 dec 06 - 01:22 |
| så underbart fin !!! |
| Venomsinner - 24 jul 06 - 10:35- Betyg: |
| Du är den bästa poeten i universum ^^ |
| _Isa_ - 22 jul 06 - 05:58- Betyg: |
| va bra..:D.. känner igen mej.. ^^ |
| Millabhozz - 22 jul 06 - 00:38- Betyg: |
| så fin................ |
| _andetag_ - 21 jul 06 - 23:39- Betyg: |
| Superbra! |
