The Daydreamer |
Do you used to wander around at daytime and gaze at the sun?
Or thinks that the time should stop go by?
Do you use to point at the clouds? And you find it strange,
That only with a shroud they all gone?
Are you the
+ kind that gazes up at the stars?
And think about the long lost and dead and they might be up there,
But still.. It remains scars.
Do you use to think what might happen in the future?
What happens to your beloved ones? Your friends? And the culture?
I think that we all at some point do something like this... And its like a big abyss..
But why don’t steal a kiss and start concentrate on what we might miss....
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| Kommentarer | | tinoz15 - 1 jun 11 - 09:35 | tack tack :) ändrat om lite i grammatiken för jag själv upplevde också vissa dela svårläst ^^
men nu tror jag att det blev bra, eller så förstördes hela dikten xD | | Jakktar - 1 jun 11 - 00:22 | | Åh, väldigt fin och bra dikt! Vissa bitar av engelskan var inte helt rätt, så det blev lite svårt att läsa, men när jag väl koncentrerade mig var det sjukt bra! Diggar budskapet och ja, allt :) |
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