You sprinkled fine words about you? The words took root in the heart of me!
There they grew and blossomed in bloom! But one day flower bed was empty;
when you tore up every root, and I just looked on without a murmur!
Why did you do in this way? We could have built up a paradise!
Each small plant was unique, that you watered with poetry,
when you said that I was a tax, and that I had a happy laugh!
And I believed in you firmly, until something inside me broke!
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| Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) |
| Ferdos-Lina - 26 dec 10 - 00:03 |
| FissyMissy:Tack så jättemycket vännen! |
FissyMissy - 25 dec 10 - 18:44- Betyg:  |
| Åh, min absoluta favorit, jättevackert!! :) <3 |
| Ferdos-Lina - 14 nov 10 - 17:14 |
| Tack så jättemycket! |
| emmy---93 - 10 nov 10 - 20:54 |
| oh my god vad vacker! |
| Ferdos-Lina - 13 aug 10 - 16:42 |
| Tack |
| Kecken98 - 13 aug 10 - 12:42 |
| Älskar dina dikter! |
| Norsin-Naralin - 6 aug 10 - 14:43- Betyg: |
| Fint och sorglig du är underbar duktig |
| Ferdos-Lina - 5 aug 10 - 14:16 |
| Tack så mycket |
| olav82 - 4 aug 10 - 21:31- Betyg: |
Det var verkligen the beautiful words, alltså en dikt med
de vackraste orden. Bra skrivet och lycka till med boken. |
| SunnaAmigo - 4 aug 10 - 18:15- Betyg: |
| Vacker... men så sorlig |
| Ferdos-Lina - 4 aug 10 - 17:33 |
| Vad tycks? |
