Lovegame, monopol and baskeball |
you love me
i love you
that's not how it really is
lady gaga can say it right, you don't need to pick a fight
it's called lovegame, isn't that ashame?
that everything we do is a game, everything we say is lame
i've tried to throw it in the garbage
i've tried to burn it up
non of it works, i even tried to put it in a cup
i can't throw it away
it only works if you say
i'm gay
i don't want it that way
that's when i can relax and have a tan
knowing you're not my biggest fan
when you'd married a man
when i leave in my van
but that's not the case
you're straight and i'm rich
we're in love like we'd been bewitched
it's not monopol at all
it's not like basketball
not that kind of game
it doesn't have a name
it's 100% for free
you only give your heart and a cup of tea
now it's your turn to throw the dice
say i love you and throw it twice!
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Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) | RowsahKanin - 5 jan 10 - 13:36- Betyg: | Lite rörigt i mitten, du började nog tänka för mycket på rimmen och förlorade dig lite i handlingen. ELler så är det bara jag som läste för slarvigt V.V
Förutom det var takten lite oregelbunden här och var, bara en liten notering att tänka på ^^
Men annars så, väldigt bra skrivet och fina rim! ^^ Speciellt slutet fastnade jag för. |
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