When I was a boy of 10,
I had a very best friend
Ted was kind, with good intent
but just a little different
My special friend Ted
his mother dropped him on his head
and he is living in a shed
We would play tag, and he would get hurt
I would play soldier, he would eat dirt
I liked math, and the spelling bee
Ted liked talking to a tree
I ran track, hung out in malls
Ted ran headfirst into walls
I had girls, and lots of clothes
Ted had names for all his toes
One day while talking to special Ted
he grabbed a brick and he swung at my head
and as he laughed at me thats when I knew
that Ted just made me special too
Now I laugh as I count bugs
I give strangers great big hugs
Next to me Ted is fine
Yeah he's a f---ing Einstein…….
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| Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) |
IT - 10 dec 09 - 20:35- Betyg:  |
| hahahaha xD me (L) otroliga rim |
| amandisa - 10 dec 09 - 19:40- Betyg: |
| grym haha ;D |
| sunnydays - 12 nov 09 - 21:21 |
| haha, bra :) |
| BlackRain - 28 jul 09 - 23:38 |
| Haha ett riktigt mästervärk:P |
| asfolk - 28 jul 09 - 23:28- Betyg: |
| Hah! Ett masterpiece, yo. |
| Poem-lover - 28 jul 09 - 23:09- Betyg: |
| Hahahaha, så sjukt kul!! :D:D |
| emmy---93 - 28 jul 09 - 22:45 |
| fan vilken skön xD |
| -Cute - 27 jul 09 - 15:45- Betyg: |
| HAHAHA SÅ BÄST<3 XD |
| Chicabaloo - 27 jul 09 - 08:36 |
| bÄST <3 :-D |
| LovesLL - 25 jul 09 - 11:27 |
| Haha! Komiskt (: |
| Only-me - 24 jul 09 - 21:16- Betyg: |
jag skrattade mig igenom hela dikten!
Den här var VERKLIGEN originell!
älskar den jätte mest x) |
| Tirala - 24 jul 09 - 16:04 |
Haha, du är verkligen bra på det här med originella dikter, har aldrig läst något liknande och jag älskar det xD! Du är en av mina favoritförfattare här på dikta, utan tvekan.
Särskilt det här stycket är helt underbart:
"I ran track, hung out in malls
Ted ran headfirst into walls
I had girls, and lots of clothes
Ted had names for all his toes" <3 |
