I touched her hair
with soft fingertips
almost as if not to break her
like she was made of glass
And I'll tell you;
She is
a porcelain heart piercing through
my soul
and making it bleed in the most
painful way
And I allow it
trickle down my chest
and down the dress
Blood of a love-wound.
So sweet, yet so deceitful.
I love you.
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| Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) |
Lillla__Jaaag - 25 nov 08 - 19:33- Betyg:  |
| Underbart fint gumman. <3 |
| Morningmist - 23 nov 08 - 17:10- Betyg: |
| Kristallklar <3 I love the way you use your english thoughout your poems. You twist and turn every sentence to form them after your liking. The depth of your passion is, to me, unknown and endless. Your words amazes me every time. <3 |
| angels_eyes - 22 nov 08 - 12:39 |
engelska är inte min grej, som sagt
men denna gillade jag
<3 |
| McGrath - 22 nov 08 - 12:35- Betyg: |
| faan det va en super dikt!! vass som glas!! <3 |
| RandigTroja - 22 nov 08 - 12:18 |
| väldigt bra. väldigt ömtåligt och fint. verkligen. |
| sonix - 22 nov 08 - 11:59 |
| Wow....skitfint |
