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Det är en text jag och min kompis jobbar på
(hon sjunger och sätter dit verser där det ska vara
och jag skapar dem) Det här är en av dom
tidigaste texterna där vi inte har kommit alls lång.
Lite stav och grammatik fel finns men den är inte klar!
I see pictures in my head.
I see children lying dead.
I see a eye fell a tear
They have everyting they fear.
Against murder and war
They don´t know what they fighting for.
It´s just so wrong
It´s been there way to long.
children face the war.
they can´t make it any more.
whit a knife and a gun
They can´t hide, they can´t run.
Ref.
Do the strong know what they do?
Do they care of me and you?
Whit a bomb to explode
Whit a weapon made to load.
They take the loved ones, they are dead.
They take the water and the bread.
And they seems to think it´s all right
But it´s not and we will fight!
If you think you knew this.
You get everyting you wish.
Your friends are still alive.
You don´t fight to survive.
This is so wrong and unfair.
We must stand up and and care.
This can´t keep go on.
So listen to this song!
Ref.
Do the strong know what they do?
Do they care of me and you?
Whit a bomb to explode
Whit a weapon made to load.
They take the loved ones, they are dead.
They take the water and the bread.
And they seems to think it´s all right
But it´s not and we will fight!
I see pictures in my head.
I see children lying dead.
Against murder and war
They don´t know what they fighting for.
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| Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 4) | Felle - 22 dec 05 - 16:19- Betyg:  | Wei. Jättebra, förutom några stav- och grammatikfel, men.. :)
Jättebra rimmat osv.. lycka till med fortsättningen. :)
Kram /Felle |
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