What are you? |
I hung myself at the back of the door.
The man from the police put me down on the floor.
My throat was cut, my wrist where too, my eyes where open but black and blue.
My face was pailed, my clothes a mess, the word "emo" where across my chest.
When I slit my throat i could not breath, but I was sure it was my time too leave.
I hang there allive for about a minute, whising ever second that the pian would finish.
and now I'm here in a place at the sky, watching down on my funeral watching down as I cry.
There is my famely who I though never cared, my sister is shaking couse shes scared.
She loved me more then words but I never knew.
My dad standing there shaking, he can't belive it's ture.
We never talked, we never played but my mom is in the morning at my grave.
She said "why did you go", the reason for that she will never know.
I went becouse I died inside, so there is no poit for me being alive.
When I hung my self I wrote a letter " do not worry i'm okey. But I wish I never saw today.
But I did, couse I hung my self at the back of the door, and the man from the police put me down on the floor.
My throat was cut my wrist where too, my eyes where open but black and blue.
I'm sorry about what you jsut herd, But I lied I live in a care home withing I died.
I cannot drink I cannot eat, I can't even sit up too see my feet.
But in this bed I will die soon, the doctor said I wont be here by june.
So now I lie here and wait untill the day I reatch the gate.
My eyes are shard and black and blue, i'm am emo what are you?
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| Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) | | fastItiden - 23 okt 08 - 15:36 | | Jätte bra skrivit. Riktigt fin engelska och rimm! | | This_is_me - 5 jun 08 - 20:47 | | tack | | Black_Bride - 4 jun 08 - 22:46 | | O.O Wow! Såååå bra skrivet, tyckte om den massa! Hemsk därimot, men bra skriven! | johannaa_ - 4 jun 08 - 21:27- Betyg:  | Wooow! Otroligt, tillförst när jag öppnade det här verket,
tänkte jag, orkar nog inte läsa.
Men när jag läst ett par rader märkte jag att det rimmade,
och fortsatte, även fast jag inte är så bra på engelska så
förstod jag nästan allt, jättebra skrivet! :D |
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