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You who stole my solitude

What if I had let you walk away
that time you turned around and left

What if I didn't ran after you
and begged you to come back

What if we allready then splitted up
and walked away through life on different paths

Would it then feel better?

Now I walk away
beg you not come after me
and walk away my own way
on a path where you don't exist

I do what I allways wanted to do
ever since that day you first betraid me
and left me
heartbroken
in a world full of darkness and fear

I'm now walking towards sunshine
so don't come after me
to put needles in my heart
cause it hurts so much

Leave me alone
now
then
for the rest of my life

"You who stole my solitude
and expelled me into this mood
who permitted you to intrude
so unelegant and rude?"

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tidda - 28 dec 07 - 15:24- Betyg:
fy satan vad vackert skrivet Elise! <333

What if I had let you walk away
that time you turned around and left

What if I didn't ran after you
and begged you to come back

What if we allready then splitted up
and walked away through life on different paths

Would it then feel better?

Now I walk away
beg you not come after me
and walk away my own way
on a path where you don't exist

I do what I allways wanted to do
ever since that day you first betraid me
and left me
heartbroken
in a world full of darkness and fear

"I'm now walking towards sunshine
so don't come after me
to put needles in my heart
cause it hurts so much"

grymt poetiskt <3
julialii - 26 dec 07 - 19:50
vackert...kände igen mej as mkt
och den låten är ju kärleken själv ;)

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27 nov 07 - 20:33
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