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Yet still miles away

I might acting crazy
Or is it like this being inlove
crying a river,
just 'cause i don't get what i want
i want you, i can be you
wind fallen in a face
and a face lost in a wind.
I am a crazy bullet of fire
Running trough all of you
In a speed so high
that i just forget the reason

Iam a lost young one
Lost in some kind of game i can not end
I'am running away from reality,
You won't touch me anymore
You walked away from me
and I cried a river
you turned your back and then
Emptyness shoots my heart right on

All of you are meny promises
a lot aren't even true
Im running trough it all,
Pass darkness and pain
Sun and laughter
standing in a cold wet rain
feeling the cold drops came down to me
hit me with a light from your heart.


your Kisses are poisend with Her
and your embrace is death it self
You are gone today, same time as always
The room i am in, is the same old wishpers
A room without walls or any corners
How can someone be so close, Yet still miles away?
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_some - 11 aug 07 - 19:54
Tack :)
Chade - 10 aug 07 - 16:40- Betyg:
Jättevacker dikt! Helt underbar.
Hittar lätt en bra takt och du beskriver allt på ett sådant bra och tankfullt sätt!
Jättebra jobbat!

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