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The words on your skin has faded.
They jused to be red, now they've turned in to shallow scars.
When you wrote them, you thought "forever".
But still, you're lying here.
They jused to say "I love you", glowing red on your pale arm.
What is left, is just white noise. And grey backgrounds.
You hear these voices, whisperes around you.
But there's no one there.
You feel your breath's coming up your throath.
Knowing that it's not many left of them.
Let's close your eyes, and wait.
It won't take long, honey.
You tried, yeah you tried.
But not enough.
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sandruskapuska - 25 jan 09 - 01:44- Betyg:
sorglig, men så vacker
wearingblack - 3 jul 07 - 12:44- Betyg:
deprimerande, men väldigt bra skrivet!!

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3 jul 07 - 12:21
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