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• We Watch The Sunrise With Greed •

A child is born and welcomed into our little sick
and twisted world. We teach her love, we teach
her hate, we teach her everything that should just
have been a big misstake. We watch her grow.
We smile when she goes on her adventurous little
first step. But I tell you now, from the time you
were born, you too got a taste of mothers sweet
and tasty milk. And then it didn´t take long before
you started to crave more and more. You are not
alone thouh. For we have all got our taste on
that addictive and sinister milk. How does it taste?
The satisfaction from fullfilling your needs? The
seed of greed have been planted and it´s roots will
dig so very deep. One day you will remember love
and you will once again start to want. It will hurt,
it will torment you, for ages to come until you find
the man in your dreams. Yes, he truly is that kind
of prince, riding on his white and marvelous horse.
He makes you happy, and he makes you cry for
every time he can´t give you exactly what you
want. Remember greed, and start to forgive.
Can you find the balance, be prepared to give?
You are not the only one around that needs to live.
And on that day when you hold that child at your
breast to feed. Don´t you dare forget that she too
will start to need. But our children is the greatest
thing to love. They are our hope, They are our sun
that shines eternaly bright. And we watch them
grow, we watch them rise with greed...
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aliiice - 8 jul 07 - 15:04- Betyg:
Underbar dikt, skitbra engelska, hittade bara ett par småfel. Inte säker på att det är rätt kategori för den var lite tung, men den var grym!
Teaterapan - 7 jul 07 - 21:58
Du är grym du med ;)
Deppnalle - 7 jul 07 - 20:49
Jag tycker inte om och kan inte skriva lika bra på svenska
albertina - 7 jul 07 - 20:48
Ännu en jätte bra dikt. Jag skulle med vilja skriva lite mer
på engelska, är hopplös det blir inte bra. Skriver du sällan
på svenska. Om du har nått kan du inte skriva en på sv...

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